I'm writing journals on lang-8
to improve my English.
Here I rewrite them according to the corrections made by the kind native speakers.
Freshly Baked Bread
I have a breadmachine at home.
I use it very often.
Freshly baked bread is so delicious, you know, and my younger daughter loves it very much.
Last evening after dinner I had just finished baking a loaf of bread and I asked her, "Why don't you have some?"
She had a quarter of a loaf.
Then she murmured, "I feel like having a little more." and had another quarter.
Two hours later, after bathing, I heard the same phrase from her again.
She finally had the other quarter loaf.
As a result, she had three-quarters of the loaf of bread AFTER HAVING DINNER!
Being young is wonderful!